For this essay, I took a couple different approaches. I tried to construct my paper in an entirely different way than I have in past. For example, my usual routine would be writing a huge outline, then going over the paper as a whole and adding details and ideas where appropriate. For this paper, I did the opposite, I constructed each paragraph as an individual, hoping to capture the idea of the paper in each.
My usual revision process is not as extensive as what I did for this paper. I feel the list Laura gave us on the assignment sheet was very helpful and I utilized that in my revision process. Along with the checklist, I submitted my paper to online revision services which gave me feedback I used to edit my essay.
It is very important to revise. I will admit, I have not been as extensive in the past, but doing so really gives you a better paper. I also did the revision process for this paper over the course of several days, which let me see minor spelling or punctuation I may have missed previously. I specifically made sure to follow exact MLA guidelines for Essay 3. I made sure there was only one space after every period, etc. Overall, I feel the construction of this paper is at par.
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